|Reviews for Rekindled|
| Dveyoni 11/4/05 . chapter 1
Deep, wonderflly deep.
| Cool-Ruzz 10/27/05 . chapter 1
Hey, thnx for reviewing my work. I really appreaciate it. I love your poetry and songs. Ur really talented and have a way with words. Its like you just let it flow, u know? I admire that. Well, I hope we could be friends becos u've certainly one of my fav authors.
| Pheobe Meryll 10/18/05 . chapter 1
I really like the allegorical/metaphorical concept of this poem. A flame was a perfect description of hidden passion...I'm sure most people around here know what you are talking about! Great last two lines, too. The only cc I would offer is in the line "But I saw smoke/More smoke/I tried/But I couldn’t light the candle" perhaps take out one of the "but"s because it gets repititious. Just a suggestion however.
| misguided mania 10/15/05 . chapter 1
awesome, i loved the candle thing and the way you put it, ur a gr8 writer
| 11009 10/14/05 . chapter 1
I like it keep writing. and thanks for the review on my poetry.
| Lyrabird 10/14/05 . chapter 1
damn you you write too good!you should keep writing songs - i'm sure they'll be sung one day. one is so so so good. i don't even know how to express it. i think that you're the best!