...Oh my. This one isn't as sad as Vindicated, but it's still quite upsetting. Except this one seems quite clear despite all the loose ends, and I'm not going to ask for a sequel. I'm happy with it as it is now! ^_^

There are many confusing things about it, though, yet they are things that seem to be implied. I absolutely adore Calvin's character, and sympathize with him entirely. It's absolutely tragic to see his world fall to pieces around him, but I know exactly what he's talking about so it's twice as bad.

I'm beginning to wonder if all of your stories will make me cry. =D

I love your writing style too!! It seems similar to my own in ways, yet different. And obviously it makes me cry, because it gets me so attached to the characters that I can't help but wipe my eyes.

Good job! And I am very happy to be the first reviewer for this story!!