|Reviews for The War Kitchen|
| Julius Gillian 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Spicy, delicious, and satisfying. Although i'd suggest you watch your ryhming... sometimes I find poems are better without rhyming. I think and this is just my opinion that if you focus too much (more than 30 seconds) on trying to find a word that rhymes with another word, it just wont work. But this is good poem nonetheless.
Make another :)