i love the way it rhymes, not forced or anything. its perfect. i can hear the sounds the ticking and the clicking, the calling and...yah i like i really do nice job! you get a hug!

Hi, it's me, Wendy, from Myspace. I like this one. Simple and catchy. Sometimes we drown ourselves in words, which puts us at risk of losing the meaning and confusing our audience. This one is great!!

Lol, its something different when I read this. Everyone is about fantasy and romance, and then I get this, lol. Pretty interesting and a break from the ordinary, good style, keep it up.

either really creepy or really funny.. lol

I like how this ended. Hehe

Very nice. I especially like how it ended.

Hehe.. Sweet!