This is really beautiful..and sad too. I don't really think it reflects my poem, however, because mine has an entirely different mood from yours. It may just be the way I was feeling when I wrote it; or the way I feel when I read yours. But, nonetheless, I think you did an awesome job.

This has great words. And an interesting rhythm.

The best part: jewels that "everyone has never seen before". Somehow that twist from the common phrase "nobody has ever seen before" just reaches me.

Thank you for checking me out. I like knowing about your works (of art!) now.

there is this deep confusioin of this fiction being a teeny bopper thing or this psychological material...Neither way it is still lyrically beautiful and stunning...Just like the person you're writing about...review my works to please..

luvs it!