i really liked it...and i like the title... :)

It looks pretty so it probbly is

My English-Japanese, Japanese-English, dictionary doesn't help, I gave up trying to translate

Nice job anyways

Wow. This poem is beutiful! Very well written.

(I may not know a lot of Japanese, but a kanji book and a little practice are very helpful! Thanks to that, I could sucessfully read your poem to its fullest).

I enjoyed the beat and your choice of words, along with repeating "nigero, nigero" in all the right places ^_^

Good job!

You know, instead of just telling me sh*t like that, you might have wanted to tell me what was so bad about it so that I would have known what to correct. Your review, have me excused, is a total waste of space.

You know; this is really kind of waste of space.