Beautiful! Your poems always seem to make me cry for some reason. O.o Loved the rhyming, it was sort of off center to a way that pulled everything together nicely.

your work is criminally under reviewed. I'm going through this sort of break up at the moment and your poem really hits the nail on the head. Fab use of formatting, great structure and a wickedly subtle rhyme scheme.

That was amazing! The only word I can find to describe it! I aboslutely loved it! I've been in that situation before. You so masterfully caputured the emotions! It was amazing!

Rio