|Reviews for rainstorms & ecstasy|
| Femme de Dieu 5/15/06 . chapter 1
Now this- THIS is fantastic! The imagery takes me away and makes me want to stay forever in that place!
This is my favorite of all that I've read of your work, and one of my favorites period. I must now go remove something else to make room for it...
| empathic life 10/30/05 . chapter 1
This is incredible. Very original, and I love originality. The imagery was breathtaking, the descriptions flawless. No cliches, all original. Metaphors are lovely. "Rain slid down your arms like the gentlest of lovers" I adore that line. Beautiful. . .
| smile persephone 10/29/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I lovelove 'rainbow tongues'. It's so original and lovely. Gorgeous simplicity.
| Leeona Trance 10/26/05 . chapter 1
It's awesome the way you tied the storm to their feelings with the third line. It's a really pretty poem, too! Vivid imagery, creative metaphors... I'm sure the rest of your stuff is just as good, too.
| hey maria 10/17/05 . chapter 1
A great beginning...really captured my attention. I love the imagery, you're so good at inventing such uncliched descriptions like "coffee-colored kisses" and "rainbow tongues." (I adored that last one.)
| JunipertheSwift 10/15/05 . chapter 1
One word: PRETTY!
| Ebony Stars 10/15/05 . chapter 1
simply delicious, really well written.
| Elizabeth Bilberry 10/15/05 . chapter 1
I like the eelings this poem gives to me and the iages that come up in my mind.
| poetic abortion 10/15/05 . chapter 1
the second line is simply gorgeous. I cn barely breath by the beyond perfection of this piece. it dazzles.