breathtaking. i love the way it flows, and how it seems alive in its own way... very nice very nice indeed...

Col. I like this. Seriously, you're awexome!

very creepy and powerful

wow...SO POWERFUL!! you defientally have a very gifted way with words! this is Em, you had reviewed one of my poems ("What Is Life For Us To See?") that my friend had posted on her account. you had made a suggestion, and i want to thank you for it, as it was a great one. i shall change it...once i figure out how to work this thing! gr...aneeways, THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM! keep up the brilliantly spiffy work!

Wow! Awesome work! Keep it up!

yes.. and it often leads to self harm~~ good poem

keep writing!