This is interesting. It is suspense. Keeps you wondering about the dolls. You have to write a story for English? That's odd. I never had to do that. lol O well. You should get a good grade for this. Hope Mrs. Shenk likes it. ^_^ lol

I liked this very much. It reminded me a bit of the book called "Coraline", but I still find it very good. I think it's suspence enough, and I hope you get a good mark.