Hey, thanks for the review!!

This is a good pondering poem. And sometimes I write very cryptic in my poetry, because the main audience is sometimes a specific person, such as in my poem dream of roses.

There are actually three languages in that poem: English, Spanish & French. I picked the Spanish to rhyme and the French for the beauty of an Old English Rose Garden belonging to a special, secret friend.

I'll email you the translation.

-Dream of Roses

Sorry... I know I kinda spurred this... It's a good poem though! ~Lizz

I love it. Quite simply: It is brilliant. Loved the last stanzsa especially. "Yet each is not the goal." Just beautiful.