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fatbird33
2008-03-16
ch 1,
"Or to hold on to that last thread of high school status where you get your 15 seconds of fame,
before the next poor girl gives in and they don't even remember your
name."

i liked this line. and i really liked the whole point of the poem. nice work
groovacious
2008-02-14
ch 1,
Thank god, you got this message across.

Oh god FINALLY. Girls, we don't need thi **. All this drama. Just focus on school, it sounds dreary but wait. Get good grades, gain some REAL friends, find you area of expertise. And if a guy comes, sure why not? Focus then dive in when you're on top and you're finished with all this insecurity.
Twilight Starr
2007-10-27
ch 1,
Nice poem. Great job expressing yourself and your confidence. ^^

~Twilight Starr~
Shateeria
2005-10-16
ch 1,
This has to be my favorite poem of all you've written. It's real, it's different, and I haven't seen anything like it. It has inspired me; it touched my heart, and I love you for that. Every last line touched me.

Shay
sunshower
2005-10-16
ch 1,
I'm a lot like you, but I unfortunently don't get what I want, I more get left out of the loop, talked to like a child, and feel like I don't belong anywhere. Good poem though, I believe it described the general female population perfectly.
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