This was haunting in a way. There's so many things that you just feel are under the surface in this. I'm not sure if you meant anything by changing to hot chocolate, or putting romeo and juliet in there, but there were some things that just struck you that they were meant to mean more. Definitely the whole winter dark/white thing at the least. The scenery that you describe is so pretty it makes you want to be there. I don't really trust Deacon. Grr. Want him to explain the darn notebook and red pen. Hm why red? Interesting lol. Haha I think I'm thinking too much into this.

Anyways nice job and hope this story doesn't end in a total tragedy

I just discovered this story, and I'm hooked. It's a haunting, yet beautifully written love story. You're an incredible writer.

I know it's been forever since you updated, but do you think you'll ever finish it?

Ooh, the intrigue! Keep it coming:)

heyy! this is such a rad story heaps cool.

Yay, she didn't get yelled at! But he'd better be coming back...

AAH! what happened?

Oh no. What what what what? What happened?

He speaks.

That was awesome. I love this story. There's something about it, I dunno what it is. It seems so black and white (literally) but that just adds to it.

*sigh*

that was lovely.

OMG, it's so beautiful. The emotions are so real. I loved it, update soon

Maybe I'm just depressing, but nothing can be that good. Something bad has to happen. though I'd be just as happy if it didn't.

The way her said her name at the end felt different... for some reason. Must see what happens! Onward!

Love that opening. December is my fav month.

Woah. A little creepy there, at the end. But I can see the whole 'loved you from the moment I saw you' thing going on. Nice.