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| R.E.D. the animator 2007-02-02 ch 4,  | abuseOnce again, your story has held up to it's reputation. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Bob Evans 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... I guess only time can tell what will happen next. Not as good as the others, but no less entertaining. |
| al-Salil 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseDude, I must add you on msn because quite frankly you rock at this! I am seriously considering threatening to get youif youdont write your last parts quickly-i would buy this if it was published.I will review the rest of ur stuff asap-but im in history atm so ya know...but keepwriting and ill add ya on msn as soon as i can. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-12-10 ch 4, | abuseOMFG./...BEN...NO! You cant end it there ! Apart from that cliffy at the end...(well i found it suspensful) this was seriously the best of them yet..and by da way this series is going they are only gunna get better..so this is a short review to tell you a few things... 1) UPDATE SOON! 2)I won't be reviewing you for the next 7 weeks due to me going to Queensland for a very long holiday...spending 2 weeks up there with kate and her family^_^ 3) I hope i talk 2 ya be4 i go..if not, i love ya man and HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR THE 18TH! J. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-12-05 ch 2, | abuseHell freaking aweseom chapter Ben...seriously, i could visualise EVERYTHING^_^ OIt is such a great story..no./..series of books, and i reckon these have great potential...i wil finish reading this later on cause i have 2 go to work in 20 mins...it sucks...i dont want to go! Neways...hows everything with u at the moment going?? From what you've said to me things have been up and down..talk me about it on the weekend man^_^ Luv ya dude *hugs* |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI knew i had read this cha[ter...i think i have read this about 10 tiems thinking i hadnt...and didnt review..jees im stoopid...neways...great openeing cha[ter ben, glad 2 c u arent losing ur touch^_^ |
| Oriel Cassandra 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseLOL! i kno...yes ben, i didn read this...BUT u kno, ill get round to it eventually...wen i hav read the others lol! cos josh says they r great and a must read! so i PROMISE tat i will read em! so how r ya ben? was GREAT to talk to u again! :D and next time, ah, lol il come on sooner so i dont hav to keep ya waitin eh? oh and i thawt...actually no, ill tell u tat next time i tlk to ya ;) anyway! hope ur still having a great time ;) hehe so until we talk again! take care! *hugz* luv me..kate |