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| Lauren Wolfe 2006-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseA hypenated name? Hmm...indeed. Now I wonder...haha, yeah, that little bit of ink is still useful! Great work! ^^ |
| ronshaberry 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this is funny. Repetition worked pretty nicely, made me smile. *smiles* |
| Roth Jopalse Sammuels 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI would have liked a little more variety in examples of the hyphen perhaps, but this is a great peice. It wraps up really nicely. "But really, I don’t.For it wastes more inkthan a blank space." Hahaha, brilliant in it's simplicity. Next time, perhaps just a few more examples though. Good work otherwise. |
| wodneythewat 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abusehyphens DO look cool in names, though i'm sort of glad i dont have one because it would be hard to type it out all the time. where do you live, if you have to sneak in bubble gum from other places? - Sam |
| sunday night sky 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abusei really like this! its not like the sort of stuff I normally read/ write (depressing stuff) but its so good! the repetition is great too! good work! keep writing :) |