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| Nathan Ridge 2006-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. WHen most people talk about vampires they mess up the basic facs. You haven't messed up the facts at all...u described what it could be like. IT was very good. |
| Rozlin 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abusei think you could have portrayed the emotions a little stronger but i do like it, with the exception of a few flaws in the logic.-Rozlin P.S. i don't mean to be critical because i sence that you're not fully confident with you writting but this is all meant to be constructive and i hope you find it so. Blessed Be! |
| Pure Autumn 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abusethis is really good |
| Ang-Dev 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abusethis is an AWESOME poem! i absolutely adore the rhyming in this and the way the lines flow is just superbly brilliant! the ending is pretty good too and i really like the way u put loads of imagery in this and use so many poetic techniques. FANTASTIC work! keep it up:-) |