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Night-Rayne 2009-06-17 . chapter 11
hm...well this is interesting ^_^
kirarin242 2008-02-17 . chapter 5
good one
kirarin242 2008-02-15 . chapter 4
really good :)
kirarin242 2008-02-13 . chapter 3
pretty good :) hope u make more soon because i'm almost done >_
kirarin242 2008-02-13 . chapter 2
good :)
kirarin242 2008-02-13 . chapter 1
really good :)!
beve 2008-01-19 . chapter 11
hello ! i like this one too ! gosh i like all ur stories o.o
TheGreenPrincess 2007-12-21 . chapter 11
aw. update? please?

;D
shootingstar89 2007-11-25 . chapter 11
please, please, please, update soon! i absolutely love it... i appreciate that you're taking the time to do a little research and get it down right. it's so in character and very individual from all the other stories. i can't wait to hear more about phoebe and elijah. after a cliff-hanger like this, you can't just leave it hanging...
Angel of the Fallen 2007-11-25 . chapter 11
this story is amazing! Half the time i want to cry because of all the bad things that happen to Elijah and the other half of the time i want to beat the people who give him trouble into a bloody pulp! seriously, how could they be so cold-hearted! those **! Even though Abigail just came into the story i feel attached to her like i do with Phoebe. If they were real they would be people who i could be friends with. Well i hope this is updated soon really its great and i wish the best of luck to Elijah! im rooting for ya!
Lady Katreina 2007-11-25 . chapter 11
Shopping spree?
Thank you for updating! ...Poor Elijah...
FictionRose 2007-10-10 . chapter 10
This is really good. I love the name Elijah by the way. Anyways, I hope you update soon!
Lady Katreina 2007-10-10 . chapter 10
Nah. Thank you so much for updating! I like Abigail, I wonder how it'll turn out.
WinterRaven292 2007-10-07 . chapter 10
Well, beside the fact that I had to reread the last chapter to remember everything. It's going really well still. I'm still totally interested in this plot and what's going on. So, congrads! You still have my attention after an entire year. Lol. :)

~*Winter*~
Roselyn Flores 2007-10-06 . chapter 10
I love the story it is so good!
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