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kirarin242
2008-02-17
ch 5,
abusegood one
kirarin242
2008-02-15
ch 4,
abusereally good :)
kirarin242
2008-02-13
ch 3,
abusepretty good :) hope u make more soon because i'm almost done >_
kirarin242
2008-02-13
ch 2,
abusegood :)
kirarin242
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abusereally good :)!
beve
2008-01-19
ch 11,
abusehello ! i like this one too ! gosh i like all ur stories o.o
TheGreenPrincess
2007-12-21
ch 11,
abuseaw. update? please?

;D
shootingstar89
2007-11-25
ch 11,
abuseplease, please, please, update soon! i absolutely love it... i appreciate that you're taking the time to do a little research and get it down right. it's so in character and very individual from all the other stories. i can't wait to hear more about phoebe and elijah. after a cliff-hanger like this, you can't just leave it hanging...
Angel of the Fallen
2007-11-25
ch 11,
abusethis story is amazing! Half the time i want to cry because of all the bad things that happen to Elijah and the other half of the time i want to beat the people who give him trouble into a bloody pulp! seriously, how could they be so cold-hearted! those **! Even though Abigail just came into the story i feel attached to her like i do with Phoebe. If they were real they would be people who i could be friends with. Well i hope this is updated soon really its great and i wish the best of luck to Elijah! im rooting for ya!
Lady Katreina
2007-11-25
ch 11,
abuseShopping spree?
Thank you for updating! ...Poor Elijah...
FictionRose
2007-10-10
ch 10,
abuseThis is really good. I love the name Elijah by the way. Anyways, I hope you update soon!
Lady Katreina
2007-10-10
ch 10,
abuseNah. Thank you so much for updating! I like Abigail, I wonder how it'll turn out.
WinterRaven292
2007-10-07
ch 10,
abuseWell, beside the fact that I had to reread the last chapter to remember everything. It's going really well still. I'm still totally interested in this plot and what's going on. So, congrads! You still have my attention after an entire year. Lol. :)

~*Winter*~
Roselyn Flores
2007-10-06
ch 10,
abuseI love the story it is so good!
icequeen401
2007-10-06
ch 10,
abuseits really good
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