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nevermore, the silent cry
2005-10-27
ch 1,
abusewhoah. man, chika, you need to make this yur career(if it isn't already), yur brilliant. i love all the natural elements, being like, so much more clean and real than the man-made world. and you're still winged self. that is awesome. this was very sad. people are sad creatures...huh...anyways, this was absolutely beautiful, definitely gonna be a fav.
Iridescent
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good - sad, sort of, but then happier at the end. I liked the part about the grass swaying for him and the trees whispering. It was nice.
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