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Reviews For: A Prayer for your Loneliness

reader
2006-05-02
ch 1,
All I can say is that i truly hope You don't actually feel like this yourself!That was rather hopeless (as in without hope as opposed to crap- it was actually very good- can't remember the right word though) and rather touching- bit depressing though. I read your (crazy! but hilarious) profile- i can see wat you mean about Christianity- i used to believe in god, but don't anymore, although i can see some good things about religion still. its just not my personal preference. Kudos for sticking to yourself and beliefs- it sounds like you have to deal with a lot of stick. (I'm bi too)
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
2005-11-20
ch 1,
The last lines were mi fav...but the hwole poem was just awesome again, well done, i think u r a great writer/port, dont stop^_^
Shadow of Oblivion013
2005-10-16
ch 1,
eerie, dark I LIKE IT! excellent work. my favorite line being: "Broken soul, tainted dreams/ A person that once was me" thank you for your kind review. i'll continue to review.

in memory,~shadow
Searching4Truth
2005-10-16
ch 1,
I really liked this! It was so dark and hopeless, but I still liked it a lot! The line "Shadows flicker and paint the space" was excellent! :-) Keep writing.
Faithless Juliet
2005-10-16
ch 1,
I liked the darkness of this; very ethereal in its nature. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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