Showing how twisted each side of love, or whatever this infatuation may be, can be.

this is amazing

nice job

i really love the last line

'& she swallows the key without a second thought'

How could one burn pieces of another's heart? I myself never want to stop believing.

Oh. POWERFUL.

beautiful format, flawless wording and imagery. the ending is just stunning. i'm running out of words today, but the only way to describe this is ... beautiful. i love your writing.

Quite beautiful. "& she swallows the key without a second thought" is a wonderful, delightful line.

I very, very much like your work.

Wow! I caught the pain flowing off of this one. I've actually been in this situation...loving a guy who doesn't believe in love. It's a really painful place to be. BTW thanks for the reviews and keep up the good work.

ohh.. very powerful.. I like..

beautiful and bitter - I loved the line "swallows the key" this is an awesome poem

swallows the key : SWALLOWS - THE - KEY. oh jesus. jesus. that is AMAZING. i love the first two lines, they are... oh god i'm sorry. i am in awe. just... just awe. sorry.

beautiful writing. amazing imagery that describes the pain wonderfully.

xoxocasey

i love this. i think it happened to me.

Very nice. Awesome job!

That was breath-taking! A very good contrast! Wonderful

wow, it's so good!