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Pinkliquor 2008-01-27 . chapter 1
Showing how twisted each side of love, or whatever this infatuation may be, can be.
relapse into change 2007-09-23 . chapter 1
this is amazing
nice job
i really love the last line
'& she swallows the key without a second thought'
she smolders 2007-02-23 . chapter 1
How could one burn pieces of another's heart? I myself never want to stop believing.
Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Oh. POWERFUL.
emergency room romantic 2006-09-10 . chapter 1
beautiful format, flawless wording and imagery. the ending is just stunning. i'm running out of words today, but the only way to describe this is ... beautiful. i love your writing.
Osunale 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
Quite beautiful. "& she swallows the key without a second thought" is a wonderful, delightful line.

I very, very much like your work.
Rowan MacKenzie 2006-06-23 . chapter 1
Wow! I caught the pain flowing off of this one. I've actually been in this situation...loving a guy who doesn't believe in love. It's a really painful place to be. BTW thanks for the reviews and keep up the good work.
ten pts above average 2006-05-26 . chapter 1
ohh.. very powerful.. I like..
Spector'sGirl 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
beautiful and bitter - I loved the line "swallows the key" this is an awesome poem
the naked civil servant 2006-02-24 . chapter 1
swallows the key :| SWALLOWS - THE - KEY. oh jesus. jesus. that is AMAZING. i love the first two lines, they are... oh god i'm sorry. i am in awe. just... just awe. sorry.
riotmaker 2006-02-22 . chapter 1
beautiful writing. amazing imagery that describes the pain wonderfully.

xoxocasey
airplanes in the sky 2006-02-05 . chapter 1
i love this. i think it happened to me.
Needa S 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Very nice. Awesome job!
piecesofeternity 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
That was breath-taking! A very good contrast! Wonderful
sarah1491 2006-01-28 . chapter 1
wow, it's so good!
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