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| Pinkliquor 2008-01-27 ch 1,   | Showing how twisted each side of love, or whatever this infatuation may be, can be. |
| relapse into change 2007-09-23 ch 1, | this is amazing nice job i really love the last line '& she swallows the key without a second thought' |
| she smolders 2007-02-23 ch 1, | How could one burn pieces of another's heart? I myself never want to stop believing. |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-23 ch 1, | Oh. POWERFUL. |
| x.beauty.x.from.x.pain.x 2006-09-10 ch 1, | beautiful format, flawless wording and imagery. the ending is just stunning. i'm running out of words today, but the only way to describe this is ... beautiful. i love your writing. |
| Osunale 2006-08-01 ch 1, | Quite beautiful. "& she swallows the key without a second thought" is a wonderful, delightful line. I very, very much like your work. |
| Rowan MacKenzie 2006-06-23 ch 1, | Wow! I caught the pain flowing off of this one. I've actually been in this situation...loving a guy who doesn't believe in love. It's a really painful place to be. BTW thanks for the reviews and keep up the good work. |
| ten pts above average 2006-05-26 ch 1, | ohh.. very powerful.. I like.. |
| Spector'sGirl 2006-04-12 ch 1, | beautiful and bitter - I loved the line "swallows the key" this is an awesome poem |
| the naked civil servant 2006-02-24 ch 1, | swallows the key :| SWALLOWS - THE - KEY. oh jesus. jesus. that is AMAZING. i love the first two lines, they are... oh god i'm sorry. i am in awe. just... just awe. sorry. |
| riotmaker 2006-02-22 ch 1, | beautiful writing. amazing imagery that describes the pain wonderfully. xoxocasey |
| airplanes in the sky 2006-02-05 ch 1, | i love this. i think it happened to me. |
| Needa S 2006-01-31 ch 1, | Very nice. Awesome job! |
| piecesofeternity 2006-01-31 ch 1, | That was breath-taking! A very good contrast! Wonderful |
| sarah1491 2006-01-28 ch 1, | wow, it's so good! |