Reviews for She Wishes you knew her secrets

Summer_rainfall 2006-05-22 ch 1, anon.	abusethat is a very real poem...it's so true...but yet, can be interprated in so many ways.
dress her up in fairytales 2005-10-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, when I first began to read, I thought the ending would be crappy, lol. But honestly, I like the way it ended because it contradicts the beginning of it. xo Tristis
itsonlyme07 2005-10-16 ch 1,	abuseThis poem didn't really have a flow to it but it was still good. I really like the llines "she wishes that she was shrouded in black every day, so that someone might revel the colors the paint the world to her." Some corrections are--in line 17 you forgot to put "she wishes that" you only put "she that" and it should be she is too deadly smart for that. Good job though, i really like the message it brings out, it is so true how people hide their secrets behind smiles.