i like it.. alot.

Ooh! So good and very true! I loved it! Keep on writing!

I like this a lot. "Wandering" is a better word to describe the situation, but I guess lost sounds better. Really really good work. It could be edited a little more, but that's up to you. I really like the theme of this poem; the infinite possibility in the world you create through poems. Good work, good work. But remember, you can do the same thing by writing a story. Poetry is more about getting your feelings out, not always telling a fictional story. What am I talking about, good work haha.