Reviews for The Beggar Maid - FictionPress.com

Ria Mala 2005-12-23 ch 1,	This is very logical, which paints a clear picture, possibly just like the painting you used to write this piece.
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-10-23 ch 1,	Wow such a powerful piece of poetry. "The gold of his Crown." Almost a religious or kingly image, yet the line before it belies it and almost remind me of the grim reaper. Very ironic piece. The whole of it just makes me cringe and feel that sick disturbing ache in my heart. Very nice flow and good piece. I like to see powerful pieces that shock me. bravo to you smile
Catticus 2005-10-17 ch 1,	cool poem, tis very emotional and mournful. tis a fav!
account not in use 2005-10-17 ch 1,	Oh, my. the ending-pure shock. wonderfully done.
The Melissa Occult 2005-10-16 ch 1,	"Nice" is all I'm able to say anymore. This did have something of an emotional impact, I guess more so for the people that see in color. So much would I like to be immortalized in a painting, there's always color in painting. But back to your poem, why should we hate? Why not choose only love? And idealist it's true, but I sometimes wonder... TMO