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| Neverlander12 2006-04-02 ch 1, | It's fantastic. Some people are made for that life, some are not. I'd accept the invitation in a heartbeat, but a lot of my friends wouldn't. Anywho- it's beautifully written. Love it. Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig |
| Konfusion 2006-03-20 ch 1, | I really enjoy your poetry (and it is difficult for me to find poetry I actually enjoy). Your imagery is right on point and absolutely fantastic. Your choices of colors is amazing. "Everything else is black and hot pink,Colors of appeal." Right on the mark. The biblical references worked perfectly, as well. This poem makes me want to reach up and grab the fruit, just to taste it - you definitely caught my attention, and curiousity. Great work! |
| Gray Angel 2005-10-16 ch 1, | wow. That is very good. I liked it alot. Your talented. |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-10-16 ch 1, | Hey...very intelligent but mystical poem. It makes me think. And yeah, it sort of like Lestat and the whole concept of Anne Rice's vampire. Sweet piece. |