Wonderful!

I really liked this, it was really good.

THank you for reviewing my story! I love phillipa Gregory too, I only recently discovered her books while wandering aimlessly through borders. I must say, your writing is very nice. It's not just an outlet of feeling or energy, not just the ramblings of many other amateur writers. Your words are very well put together. This is a very good story.

Very vivid, and very good. I think this may have been close to what Katherine was thinking, but who can really know that? You show a lot of promise.

-Lara

Needs some definate work on spelling and grammar. Make sure you use a Word Processor, or get someone to check your work before you post it. That is extremely important if you want to be a write.

Compliments on getting your historical facts right, down to the detail of Katherine's final words.

Your language is good, but it flows awkwardly in some places. Try reading it aloud to yourself. This will help you with punctuation as well.

A good first effort, but keep working on refining, and things will be better.

good! i would recommend cutting down on using her name so much, you use it in like every sentence! and remember to make her thoughts italicised, or to put this ' ' around them.