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ngt 2007-08-17 . chapter 5
I really like this story, i hope you continue it...someday.
blackrose214 2007-08-13 . chapter 5
Hey there! I think I just fell in love with another one of your stories and what do my tired eyes have to see? Last updated 12-19-06? Don`t do this to me!
I really really want to know how this contunues! And frankly, I don`t think it`s bad or "not-very-good" as you put it. Nor is it immature. I like it and I`d really love to read more. Isn`t that enough?
chris 2007-05-04 . chapter 1
please update soon...i really would like to know what happens next...:>
chris 2007-03-21 . chapter 5
i would really like to find out what happens next...please update soon...:>
Aimee Straughston 2007-02-08 . chapter 5
Oh, I do hope you continue this! I like it a lot. It's very interesting and the characters are really adorable. Have you read "Taking These Chances"? I forget who it's by, but this reminds me of it.
Anyway. Do continue.
la-vita-bella 2007-01-17 . chapter 5
Hellzyeah. Dude, I am so still reading! A lot are! I love this story. Actually, I liked it even better than your other. I mean, they're both excellent writing-wise, but my personal taste prefers this. Oh, don't quit it, please! I'm so anxious to see how Damien and Stephan's relationship developes. They're both so original. I mean, we all know the suave, demon guy from all the books, but you've given him a character all his own. Same with Stephan. This is one story where I really cannot predict how the relationship will form. And it was so exciting! Just please don't take it down...D: However...being an author myself (on this site...haha), I know that sometimes you just can't continue...So, if you feel you absolutely positively have to, then I won't object. BUT please either tell us the ending (I did that once with a story that I didn't want to continue...xD) or as you already suggested, give it to someone else. Just be wise in your decision. I mean, some people are great fans, but they really don't understand characterization or the concept of a certain story. Give it to someone who you KNOW will finish it right. Maybe even tell them your ending and let them follow those lines. Oh, I just really would like to see how this develops. Haha, its not even the end I'm worried about, it's Damien and Stephan! Heh. Well, I'll understand whatever you do. Hearts!
DH L'Orange 2007-01-08 . chapter 5
hey Rinna!

I'm still reading this! If you need a reader for you to write, count me as one!

: )

DH
The Little Neko Nya 2007-01-08 . chapter 5
Don't not continue! I'm still reading it. That's at least one that really wants you to continue. I like this story a lot, and the characters are really cool, soo... are you going to?
Mage Dudette 2007-01-06 . chapter 5
yeah, i'm reading this!! i really like it, so please don't chuck it in! ^__^ it's cute too, in a weird way i guess, but i really want to know what happens! so yeah.. please don't stop?
Jessica Chadbourne 2007-01-05 . chapter 5
Yay!! The Holly updated. Happy Birthday! *Gasps* Oh No! Now the Jessica has to update too!! *Scurries off to update*
Naatz 2006-12-28 . chapter 5
I'd really like it if you continued. :) I just now found it, and it shows so much promise!

I could see how your writing changed in the middle. You've apparently gained a lot of confidence and depth in this year, and I think it fits you.

Oh, please continue. ;_;

|Meduza|
satc 2006-12-20 . chapter 5
FINALLY! that's all i can say. do continue, very interesting story, must see more
Prisoner-11 2006-02-07 . chapter 4
'Nother chapter please! I can't wait to see what happens!
Cherise 2006-01-11 . chapter 4
Haha, Damian's cute. He's funny, too. And I'm guessing that Stephan has a secret about his..."abilities" right? That's why he's so scared for people to find out. ANd...maybe his dreams are because of his power?
D. Empress 2006-01-05 . chapter 4
Looking forward to the next chapter--a very dramatic story!
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