Reviews for Poem For Jake - FictionPress.com

sunday night sky 2005-12-02 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful. a lovely dedication.
mizu no kokoro 2005-10-19 ch 1,	abusebeautiful dedication... the emotions were heartfelt~ lovely work keep writing!
Lines To Time 2005-10-19 ch 1,	abuseI don't even know what to say to this. I could analyze your language and tell you how wonderful some of the set-ups you used are, or how effective the poem as a whole was, but I feel like that would be insensitive and, somehow, wrong. All I can think, really, is oh my god, how horrible, and that too is inadequate and out of place. I can't really leave a review for this, except to tell you that you've done one thing right: perhaps the boy didn't live more than three short years, but I know of him now where I never would have before, and in some respects poetry does immortalize. By which I mean, if I died I would like to have this done for me, and therefore by writing this you have done the right thing. I hope that offers some sense of comfort.
Princess-anna57 2005-10-17 ch 1,	abuseOh nicely written. Good work. Write on! ~Anna~