I like this. It sounds like screaming, like sobbing and screaming... the questions you raise are familiar to me, but it's interesting to hear them aimed at the Christian Lord--I'm not religious at all. I guess everyone is asking what you ask in their own way, to themselves or to their own God. It's good to share your take on it, get it out there. Again, I like this.

Hey Jeremy it's me Thayne I really liked this poem. It was really meaningful and it goes great with what is going on right now in Iraq.

Wow. This is a great poem/song. I like it a lot.

It is true that a lot of men die during war in battles that seem worthless just to show political power. The Lord is always with them, and those who believe in Him will either make it back safely or live eternally in a higher place.

Good job. It is really good.

im not sure what to say about this one except for the fact that i like it. its true, many have died in war and i can only imagine what a sight it is to see that...hopefully i wont have to but you never know when you join the army...keep up the great wor!JF:P