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Anika 2006-10-06 ch 7,	Ben and Cailin HAVE to get back together
Anika 2006-10-06 ch 1,	This sounds like a really good story so far. The plot and characters sound really interesting...needs to be finished for my sanity
Cariwyn 2006-02-26 ch 7,	So..no more italics. But no more story either. At least for now. But you promise you will come back, so I'll be happy with that. Besides, it's better for you to write this when you want to or feel inspired to then to just try to force out more chapters for the readers. I'm kind of sad, but Nightingale will continue. Okay, so the chapter now. Cailin got kicked out. It was expected though. Ben actually reacted better than I would think. Poor Ben, though. And the Cailin goes to Brenden's? Wow. Stupid her if she ever wanted to work things out with Ben. And poor, poor Betsy. I think that Brenden and Cailin don't really know each other well enough to love each other. I think they're both just not satisfied and hoping for something else. I think Cailin idolized Brenden too much as someone she would want to be with. Cailin realizes that she's screwing up, and still wants to be with Brenden, so that counts for soemthing. Brenden is so understanding in the McDonald's scene. He says the things that girls dream for a guy to say. Ahh... And then Kate plays the good best friend, no matter how hurt she is. And Ben ends it. Wow. Big things happened. So now Cailin's free to be with Brenden. I don't know if she'll want him as much now that she can actually have him. And Cailin's going to be feeling really guilty. Hmm.. I don't know. Everyone wants Cailin and Brenden to end up together, but if they did, Cailin would feel so guilty all the time. I'm sure whatever you do will make sense though. So, I hope you do post one more chapter. Keep us all updated. I love this story and your writing, and can't wait to see more. I really don't mind waiting that long; I'm sure it'll be that good. Okay. So that's all for now. Until next time, Cariwyn
foamyfan15010 2006-02-15 ch 7,	Aw! You're so mean! I thought they were finally gonna be able to be together, dammit! lol Anyway, I'm sad that you're putting this on hiatus, but I understand. I hope you feel inspired soon, though. ;o)
CrazyDelusional 2006-02-14 ch 7,	Yay! I'm so thrilled that their isn't going to be italics throughout the whole story any more.
euphorictragedy 2006-02-13 ch 7,	This is so typical of me. I read a story that I really like and then the author goes on hiatus! I'm not mad at you, ok, a little upset but I know what it's like to have writer's block. I think I'll always have it. I haven't been able to finish a story in a really long time.
CocoaFlavourPunk 2006-02-12 ch 6,	Wow! I love the way you've written this! And Aw I feel so bad for Brenden! Well i'm off to see your other fics! xx
foamyfan15010 2006-01-26 ch 6,	Ya know, I really don't like Ben. I'm not completely sure why... but I don't. He's seems so whiny, and really inattentive of Cailin. I kind of hope they don't work their relationship out and she can be with Brendan. This chapter was excellent; I can't wait to see how everything plays out now that the past has been told. Oh, I loved this line, by the way: I shook the thought away, tired of constantly fighting with myself. It wasn’t normal. What are you talking about? Fighting with yourself is completely normal. lol My characters do it all the time. ;o) Speaking of my characters, FFY is currently one of my main priorities. I've got about six and a half pages done so far, and I've been working on it a little every day. Hopefully it'll be out soon. You remember when I used to update everyday, huh? Well, I seem to remember you thought I was crazy for doing that. lol You're just never satisfied... :o)
CrazyDelusional 2006-01-26 ch 6,	Wait, isn't this the starting point of the first chapter?
Cariwyn 2006-01-24 ch 6,	Yes! You're back! You're alive! Well, it hasn't been that long, but I'm still excited. So, on to the chapter. Really good. We're in the present now? Fun. And now you won't have to use italics anymore, as you said. Duncan was an asshole, telling Betsy to call Cailin on Brenden's phone. As for Kate, well, at least she now seems not as shallow as before. I feel bad for Cailin, but it was her fault. As for Ben, the only problem is that you don't see if Cailin wants to stay with him or how much she does. He kind of seems like the safety love, not passionate, but yes, safe and someone she can fall back on. This chapter wasn't as long as some of the others, so I don't have much to say. Good job, good luck on the next chapter. Oh, and Brenden's drunk spree? Inspired by Cailin and him and Betsy and him breaking up, plus Duncan betraying (though that might be too strong a word)him. Yeah, completely provoked and understandable. In the next chapter, will we go to the present? As in, she's done telling Ben everything, and now we see what she does? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. Everyone's rooting for Brenden, I think. I don't know who would root for Ben, but I don't know if Brenden and Cailin could ever work out. I have complete faith that you could make it believable, though. So, I guess that's all for now. Thanks for the response; I can't wait for the next chapter.
bex17 2006-01-24 ch 6,	This was so great! Please update soon!
foamyfan15010 2006-01-05 ch 5,	O... And Kate finally finds out. I was wondering how long that would take. I hope you're feeling better soon, and congratulations again on your nomination! hugz
CrazyDelusional 2005-12-20 ch 5,	Uh oh. She has a lot of problems to work out.
CrazyDelusional 2005-12-20 ch 4,	Ah! I'm behind in my reading! She's wearing a skirt. shivers God, she must be freezing to death. I don't know how people do that.
Spotty885 2005-12-19 ch 5,	I love this story! not only is it about a band, but it's amazingly written. I love band stories and star-crossed lovers. Please write more and feel better ;). Maya

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