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| KimEh-3 2005-10-17 ch 1,  | abuse"Smiles are just frownsCarved upside down." - I've never thought of it that way... Great job. I can't believe this is your first post. I can't wait to read what you post next. btw, I love your name... "words fail me". Now why didn't I think of that... |
| Hotaru Negai 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the way your poem is set up on the page. The eye follows down nicely. Sounds like a long haiku, simple but meaningful diction. Sounds like the beginning of something long. Are you considering expounding it some more? |
| Evaa Moffat 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abusegreat job. beautiful piece. i love the way the last two lines portray the emotions and outlook of the character. keep posting ~evaa |