wow. very powerful. I love it ^^

I went through a lot of trouble, finding this name again, and logging on and off. You better appreciate me! Lol.

Well, this is Barek, again. I just read your poem, and I absolutely had to re-review it.

It was an amazing poem, every time I read it, it gets better and better. You know where to put the emphasizing marks, you know how to use words to create such a vivid picture for the reader, it is great. There really isnt much more I can say, except --> WRITE MORE OR SUFFER!

-B

Good poem, good poem.

Hey, this is good! Very serious for you! It's very sexy! Sorry, I didn't realise you had an account! thinking back, you may have mentioned it, but you said you just reviewed! Anyways, keep up the great work! and don't worry, you don't have to kill me I will update! I'm just thinking how to start the next chapter! Argh! Ok! *Goes off to readother stories*

brilliant Shadray!I loved it! I'm gonna go away now and read your other stories and stuff...just to make you happy.Nyviayx

AHH WHAT IS THIS?! Why is every one like a professional writers?! Jerks! lol i'M Totally jealous of your writing! (which translates into this was an awesome poem and i wish i could write like this!)

ok well i'm off to go sulk bout not being a good writer .. -sulk sulk- okies well toodles! -waves-

I really love this poem. It shows everything we feel so often. The despair and lack of hope and yet it shows that if we struggle forwards we'll find a new path or light. It's a really good poem and goes directly to fav section *nods*. The structure is also great (I can't do that part *grins*).

Going. See ya soon, Reyavie