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| Miss-Nina 2006-01-24 ch 2,  | abuseBwa ha ha! XP I love your creepiness when you write Kchan. It freaks me out so much!! PHWEE. (In a good way tho. lol). Someday I will read your books!! And I'll be all, "Yaya, that's my dude Kchan from the 6th grade, yo." Wait... I won't really know your name tho. :: sweatdrop:: Yeah... I kind of sent the Andersonn person mean mail too. ^_^` Heh... Oops. Anyhow, beautiful!! And frightening... Oh, and I can't wait for Mangaka Idol to update!! X3 Yee okay, i am finished blabbing nina-chan |
| Geistjaeger 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat is the motivation of the killer? Is he just messed up? I liked. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuseNot creepy. I would have made it into a chase. THe ripping of the napkina nd stuffing it into the dogs mouth was silly, the police can do jigsaw puzzles. Anyway, the note was too rambling and some parts were irreleveant if the person writing it was fearing for their life. Make it shorter and less decorated, more to the point and direct. Two killings in one day is a lot and it is unreasonable. Good idea. |
| Advent of Apocalypse 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuse*shakes head* And that, is why you should always make sure your doors are locked. This story creeps the hell out of me, in a good way. |
| nothing yet 2005-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abusenow i dont have a membership here but im going to sign up. I just love horrors and i thought yours was awesome short but sweet and right to the point you wrote this brilliantly! anyways bye |
| Miss-Nina 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseBlink blink i wish i hadn't read that. I really do. That was really really scary. Will the story be about the murderer or the kids? HM. I don't know why i thought it was a girl writing the note. It really could've been a boy, huh? Yeah. Kind of scary how he killed him. I just would've ran Ah, Kchan and her thrillers. How bout a story without so much gloom? Anyways, this was really good. It was. MN Oh, Kchan. I know you were nagging on me to update Tsumiyo SAGA. 10 is up. |
| Nikufei Ronda 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseVery creepy but well-written! |