This makes me wonder what the story behind this Mike character is. The characters in this poem seem like such intense people. You have a great way of expressing yourself.

Was the formatting accidental? Or was it on purpose? You can never tell with fictionpress.

my sn is SgiursDan2004, by the way.

I loved this; I had a relationship like this with a guy named Mike once. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.