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Reviews For: The Proverbial Anvil

Teeteerae
2008-01-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseFour thumbs up! Wait... I only have two thumbs... so TWO THUMBS UP! Six stars! uh... I mean... FIVE STARS!! And all that other good stuff that I'm to lazy to mention!
Ok... please ignore the stupid person posing as me. I love this story and... CONGRATULATIONS! This is my first story I've read here. Take note of the word "here" since I'm usually read fan fiction.(if there's a difference between the stuff at and the storys here)
Wow this is the longest review I've wrote EVER! Cool! Your VERY lucky since I don't review very often and the only times I do is when a story is really good. So I hope this review made you laugh, cause thats what I was going for.
panthera*tigris*sumatrae
2005-11-14
ch 1,
abuseI like this, it flows nicely and I like the plot. It kind of reminds me of "Gingerbread" a book I read... I've never been in this situation but I've known people whoi have. Please keep writing. Oh and more chapters!!
Eyes of Olympus
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abuseawesome. The characters could be more well drawn, but i love the metaphors and similies - rock on!

Peace
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