UPDATE!


Dammit! I feel so fricking bad for both of them! Especially for the girl... Maybe cause while the guy had his mom who loved him, she had no one...no wait... Both their situations sucked.

I dunno but it's sad that these tiny kids have to face crappy parents.

Update soon... I know I said that before but I really want you to.

-TOC

WOW! this is really good!
Its so sad tho wot happens to both of them, poor tings. I cant wait till they meet for the first time, itll be great.
I cant wait till the next chapter, its really good!
Im definately putting it in my favourites, I find the ending bit sads tho, bout them abandonin her and all, and the mom thing. so sad. Oh wellz, anywayz plz update soon!

That was great please update soon!

Wow interesting plot, I can't wait to find out where it goes to.

I really hope you update this soon. ^_^

I can't wait until they meet. Hope you update soon.

oh no! poor girl... Keep going i like this story

Great story!

I'm really enjoying this story, and I look forward to more. You're characters are interesting and I love how you have Theo talk to Miss Know-Body. Please update soon!

~Elexies

I'm loving this story so far! Which is weird given the content, lol.

It may not seem like much but I love how you've grasped a 6 year olds speech. Not many authors pull that off (going from what i've read off the net), you either have them sounding like they're 2, or sounding like they're 20. Theo was actually believable.

I *really* hope you update soon.

~I probably should've waited to read this until it's finished, I fear I may get very impatient if it's not updated regularly. ~ ;o)

Should I enjoy stories like this as much as I do? ...probably not. Oh well. I'm loving it!

MORE! MORE, DAMMIT!

WOW! I loved this! Please update soon!!

beautifully written.

I cant describe to you how great this plot is. I can tell its going to be a wonderful story. please PLEASE continue with it