   SmearedRedTearDrops 2009-06-10 . chapter 24WOW the fight was great! |
 Fairytale Rescue 2008-04-18 . chapter 24Please consider updating again! It's such a wonderful story and I hope to read more. |
 Arsenel 2006-09-27 . chapter 24Wow this is really good, kinda late on the updates, but the fic s well worth it. Can't wait to see how it ends if you ever post it. |
 Adiwin 2006-09-24 . chapter 24Wow, that battle was amazing. I loved it! I could take some lessons from you on how to write fighting scenes. Hey, this was great, and I was wondering if you could possibly review my story, The Four Children of the Elements? It would be great if you could, because I have some fighting scenes that could use some critiquing. Tankies! :) |
 Falling Envy 2006-09-14 . chapter 24Umm...question...When are you going to update? July 5 was over 2 months ago and I am dying without a update. |
 Stephanie Akers 2006-06-30 . chapter 24You've got a good story here! Good work. |
 lala 2006-06-30 . chapter 24 thankx for updating!it was a great chapter!i really enjoy your story |
| .... 2006-05-31 . chapter 23 i luv this story!it is so original and different from other story plots!i think you should publish it |
| southern 2006-05-14 . chapter 22 where is the next chapter? :) |
| Snow Wolf Alpha 2006-05-05 . chapter 22 I just looked at my review and realised my mistake, I'm terribly terribly sorry. I meant the complete opposite, I meant "Please Update Soon". I love this story. So sorry, please don't be offended. That'll teach me not check my writing.
Again I'M SO SORRY
The question still stands, have you ever thought of turning this into a book? It's certainly better than some of the books I've read. |
| Snow Wolf Alpha 2006-04-16 . chapter 22 What a cliff hanger, please don't update soon. I love this story and the update was worth waiting for. Don't give up on it.
By the way, have you ever thought of turning this into a book? |
| Lily 2006-04-13 . chapter 22 I really like your story. . .keep writing it. |
 Getuie 2006-04-12 . chapter 22Did Kaltor never learn that you don't strike a lady? |
 Flying With Fish 2006-04-12 . chapter 22huh!? What!?!?!? How could you leave us there!?!?!?! That's just plain evil. Pure evil. *scowl* Horrible cliffie. Bad Author. *deeper scowl*
A good chapter though, even if it took you like forever to give it to us. Seriously that was too long. Of a wait, I mean. But yay! There was Marick! We have to love him. He is the most awesome bishie boy ever. Ever as in forever. |
| lala... 2006-03-15 . chapter 21 i luv this story!it is different and interesting...plz update! |
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