Reviews for The Whims of Lady Luck REVAMPED

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Ella 2008-09-23 ch 9, anon.	abuseThis story is awesome! Love the adventure these boyz are on and truly hope you continue.
Bekk 2007-12-03 ch 9, anon.	abuseI feel like such a tool lol. I read your original 'de-vamped' Whims of Lady Luck, then noticed how long it had been since you had updated... I was trying to see whether you had any other stories you'd updated lately, and I find this! I love the new version, though I am a bit sad it is this far behind... But! I shall enjoy myself by reading your other bundles of slashy influence! Update soon!
Curb Crasher 2007-10-30 ch 9,	abuseAlistair is a smart horse. Great chapter!
V.E. Silber 2007-10-25 ch 9,	abuseoh what a teaser! love u so much as always, my favourite fictionpress author and probably 1 of my favourite authors of all times. keep up the amazing work, and /please/ update soon. much love, support, and appreciation; -nicky
Chainlinks 2007-10-23 ch 9,	abuseI always run out of words when I'm trying to tell you how much I love reading your writing. Especially this story. Merrin and Samuel just make something in my stomach go all fluttery and happy. I'm really, really looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
lilylupin7 2007-10-22 ch 9,	abuseno it's a cliffhanger involving a dragon!
V.E. Silber 2007-07-02 ch 8,	abusedamnit! i stressed in my last review, the 1 4 "Taking These Chances", how much i admire u & love ur writing style & ur stories, ur ideas, etc, etc. the same still stands 4 this story. it has blown me away & left me positively addicted. i cannot wait 4 the new chapter(s), i am in love with the characters - i have a soft spot in my heart 4 cynical characters with hidden afection just benneath the surface. so, i hope u read reviews & have just a /tinsy/ bit of sympathy 4 my craving & addicted need 4 ur story - (disregard the shorthand, it's just 2 save space). with much love & admiration, i remain ur faithful fanatic, V.E. Silber
Aphrael 2007-06-15 ch 8,	abuseHee! I love the ending scene! So smexy... Deny it all you want, Merrin, it's not fooling anyone! cackles I love you and this story. =D
Aimee Straughston 2007-05-18 ch 8,	abuseAw. I adored Merrin at the end of this.
silverdragon4736 2007-05-17 ch 8,	abuseI've read the original version of this story and I'll admit that I had my doubts about this revamped version. I didn't think you could improve it and saw no need to. Luckily, curiosity got the better of me and I just had to check it out. I must say that I am very impressed with how this turned out to be! Really brilliant writing! silverdragon4736
Haven36 2007-05-15 ch 8,	abuseWonderfully written, refreshingly original!
lilylupin7 2007-05-14 ch 8,	abuseMerrin is just too cute
xanthofile 2007-05-14 ch 8,	abuseah, i do believe i adore this version more than the first, if only for the rather heated advancement of thier 'relationship' in and of itself. i think the first was more amusing, but that just might be time removed playing tricks on me. oh well.
Chainlinks 2007-05-14 ch 8,	abuseThat last conversation between the boys killed me, it really did. Merrin and Samuel are probably my favorite out of all your characters. Every line of dialouge they have together either sets me off giggling or, in the case of the last conversation, makes me "Eep!" loudly enough to alarm the family in the apartment next door. I really, really, really love the way Merrin and Samuel's relationship keeps evolving while some things remain the same ("And there’s nothing like Samuel at his most innocent to irritate me beyond all hope of peace." -- definitely my favorite line in the chapter). Overall a completely beyond fantastic chapter. I'm definitely looking forward to the next!
sporkess 2007-05-14 ch 8,	abuseI really loved this chapter. The way you've got these two dancing around each other makes me smile, but simultaneously feel sorry for them both. Poor darlings. Hopefully the next chapter will give them a little resolution - but part of me wants the amusing uncertainty to continue. Great chapter, and I hope more follow soon.

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