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| The Postscript 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHe always joked about how there was never a truly merry Christmas. Something always happened, all you had to do was turn on the news to hear about murders, kidnapping and everything else that managed to go wrong. But this Christmas it was me who felt this...because he died only four days before. And this time it was his dying that made everything about the joyous holiday fade away. I knew I should have been happy he was home for the holidays. But I missed him. Beautiful write...you evoke very strong emotions with your words. Keep writing. |
| T41N7 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. The emotions from this really keep me from writing anything else. You are a great poet, keep writing. |
| Lakona 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseOh wow Jen, Thats all I can say. I wonder where the inspiration came from. It's beautiful. |