that was amazing...wow...i have felt that way so many times. and MCR always makes it better...god...that was amazing.

One second I'm reading and the next moment I'm sining a song. You really pulled me in. I'm gonna go Get my MCR CD now...Keep writing

-Genesis F.T

It was okay. Awkward at some parts though. The lyrics of the songs fit in well and sorry to say but I thought this was a little bit too whiney. Sorry.

I've never listened to MCR, but the lyrics fit in with this story. Fast and intense, i can feel the protagonist - if that makes any sense - and the fast, blurring pace makes it real.

Somtimes music is all we have... isn't it funny that music can suit our mood?

wow...

Me being a huge MCR fan, I found this greatly astonishing work. You really got a strong hold on the feeling of helplessness in it. It is sad though, how she (or you) thinks of herself... Don't let the world bring you down. There's always someone out there willing to be your friend... turn to them for all you need.

maybe sometimes it seems like there are too many things between you (a past, a word, pride, lies, boys, distance...or in my case, behaviors...) there is always someone there... keep your mind open *wink* and dont be afraid to stick up to your parents, not necessarily telling them everything, just...holding your own...

I love your writing. cant wait to see more of it...

I think you're very talented, but it might speak stronger to My Chemical Romance fans if you got the lyrics right. Just a suggestion...

great nice and Angst just the way I like it. I've never really thought about the songs alot. I just sing along. Now I got to go listen to them again more carefully

wow. I really liked it ... rather intense and fast, but it worked well that way. good job! i like little boys!