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crinkled aster ribbon
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abusegorgeous and oh so beautiful.everything in this poem is perfect.
Jezsh
2005-12-21
ch 1,
abuselyric and beautiful
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseI love the alliteration.
youzi
2005-11-15
ch 1,
abuseloved the wordplay in "unseen unheard unsung" and also the line about the " inevitability of a newton's cradle". do keep writing :D
Cyssel
2005-11-15
ch 1,
abusethe ending is ever so poignant, and the whole poem seems so surreal, accompanied by the beautifully painted imagery.
really
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abusewe fall out and fall in and dip out of your illusions as you sing us lullabies to sleep.

wow.

i'll wait for the next eternity too!
addie pray
2005-10-19
ch 1,
abuseThis was quite beautiful. I love the cryptic imagery, and it just has this cold-coffee, dusty morning serenity. So well written.
poetic abortion
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abusepowerful detail and as always gorgeous imager/diction.

~* noelle
Faithless Juliet
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abusePowerful detail, I loved the story telling in this; how it evolved through each verse. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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