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| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-01-24 ch 1,  | abusegorgeous and oh so beautiful.everything in this poem is perfect. |
| Jezsh 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuselyric and beautiful |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI love the alliteration. |
| youzi 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseloved the wordplay in "unseen unheard unsung" and also the line about the " inevitability of a newton's cradle". do keep writing :D |
| Cyssel 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abusethe ending is ever so poignant, and the whole poem seems so surreal, accompanied by the beautifully painted imagery. |
| really 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abusewe fall out and fall in and dip out of your illusions as you sing us lullabies to sleep. wow. i'll wait for the next eternity too! |
| addie pray 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was quite beautiful. I love the cryptic imagery, and it just has this cold-coffee, dusty morning serenity. So well written. |
| poetic abortion 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abusepowerful detail and as always gorgeous imager/diction. ~* noelle |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abusePowerful detail, I loved the story telling in this; how it evolved through each verse. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |