|Reviews for spinning empty|
| crinkled aster ribbon 1/24/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous and oh so in this poem is perfect.
| Jezsh 12/21/05 . chapter 1
lyric and beautiful
| Nobody-n-Particular 12/16/05 . chapter 1
I love the alliteration.
| youzi 11/15/05 . chapter 1
loved the wordplay in "unseen unheard unsung" and also the line about the " inevitability of a newton's cradle". do keep writing :D
| Cyssel 11/15/05 . chapter 1
the ending is ever so poignant, and the whole poem seems so surreal, accompanied by the beautifully painted imagery.
| really 10/30/05 . chapter 1
we fall out and fall in and dip out of your illusions as you sing us lullabies to sleep.
i'll wait for the next eternity too!
| addie pray 10/19/05 . chapter 1
This was quite beautiful. I love the cryptic imagery, and it just has this cold-coffee, dusty morning serenity. So well written.
| poetic abortion 10/18/05 . chapter 1
powerful detail and as always gorgeous imager/diction.
| Faithless Juliet 10/18/05 . chapter 1
Powerful detail, I loved the story telling in this; how it evolved through each verse. Keep up the good work.