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| Sapphirina 2005-10-19 ch 1,   | I hate the war too. Your poem was so good. I enjoyed the last line alot and also the part that says "Like a river we split apart Nestling in a gentle creek And leading chaos down a waterfall rampart The answer to why we are a duality Eludes us, making us remember our mortality" TO be honest the whole poem was beautiful and so original. |
| Boo! 2005-10-19 ch 1, | very interesting, it has a good point about war. let me guess america is a bunch of little scared mice? lol nice. and i'm a lazy kitty ^_^ power to the kitty! lol anyways nicely wrote. keep up the good work. |
| Hoshiko-Hime 2005-10-19 ch 1, | that was a really great poem I really like that 1 it has alot of meaning behind it. |