i love the way this is written. from the beginning it just makes you think. it's just a pretty metaphor with the wings and all, i liked that. and the ending? it was a little heartbreaking. shows how much you can truly share with the world. nice job.

This is pritty damn good. I really like it.

tehe, i loved it.

wow. this is just...wicked. i like to think the wings are metorphorical, like they symbolise the good image you put on. and god, don;t i just know it- icould only just image what would happen if friends/ family read my girl stories...this has alot to it. it really does tell alot that isnt even said.

Different very different