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| Tarot-Mistress585 2006-08-16 ch 7,  | abusel.o.v.e. you. love your i.n.k. gone t.e.c.h.n.o. |
| maris 2006-05-07 ch 7, anon. | abusethis is really beautiful. i very much like it. it kind of strikes a chord that can be identified with. |
| Lynn 2005-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse:) Thanks for the update...REALLY good. Of course. |
| Lynn 2005-11-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseGAHH Update Please! |
| Alley Cat 2005-11-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseOdd bit of fiction, a little more miserble and sad for me |
| hello 2005-11-07 ch 6, anon. | abusei am amazed by your talent...seriously ur wrting is just to good to describe with woords ...its soo jumbled that it leaves you wanting more...its controlled caos and it works! i love this write new chapter soon ... |
| Lynn 2005-11-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseLove :) |
| thelovinspoonful 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was so ... awesome. Sometimes it was a little hard to follow, but you know what? I think I like it like that. It's so real, and since when is real life easy to follow? I love it. I love your characters. Just wow. |
| Lynn 2005-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! I really do. I was bored and I figured I wouldn't like this story actually, I mean to me the title wasn't all that wonderful, but I started reading it and...wow. Nicely done, it is very good. I especially like how you write how they speak or whatever. Its nice, kinda poetic, yet...still a story. Very nice. |
| ice bitten 2005-10-19 ch 2, | abuse"Why not indeed?" I love how you make your characters say such realistic things when they are talking to themselves. I'm not sure who Theo is, but I'm going to love finding out. :] I like the interaction between the girl and then guy...sorry didn't catch their names... The interaction between them reminds me of something wistful, and a kind of sweet ignorance that lingers betweent them. Love your style. :] |
| ice bitten 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI...I seriously like this. You are such a talented writer. I was already hooked into this by your beginning paragraph. Your descriptions on concerning the boy was a perfect imagery. Please keep working. :] |