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Reviews For: Metal folding under my hand

Infection
2006-01-07
ch 1,
this was interesting.
Alterego001
2005-11-28
ch 1,
well done another good poem, its based on your last art project isnt it, i can rememebr your rists hurting. well done keep it up.
Thorn's-girl
2005-10-18
ch 1,
This is excellent, especially these lines here:

"I don’t feel at peace

Breathing fast

I flash images through me that could build anger

My fist holds the hammer to tight and my wrist burns and is pulled to fare"

WOnderfully done.
Lipstick Stained Massacre
2005-10-18
ch 1,
Well well, you don't see poems like this one often. A welder, i presume? Nice job. ^_^
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