well written, I enjoyed the last three lines especially.

Woah, I love that last stanza! Its really powerful! Great job on this Hawke, I love it!

Much love, Rosanna.

I love how you play with the images of love, and angels; it really creates a powerful picture. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

This is so beautiful! I love it! Great wording and I like the formatting. Great job! QueenVixta