 benalee 2006-06-13 . chapter 1great story please update soon,and if you got a minute check out my story a life of my own |
 multiples of six 2006-06-12 . chapter 6You should definitely keep updating this story! There is SO little femmeslash on this site... less than there used to be, or it seems like it anyway. (And understand, I adore femmeslash.) I was just thinking what a good friend Travis was when he came out of left field with that.. which makes things a lot more complicated, hm? So update, update, please! =D |
 Jessica Chadbourne 2006-06-12 . chapter 6Hey! It's good to see you writing again, really good. I probably should think about starting up again too, but I may just be to lazy. Please keep it up, it might be a good way to stay in contact with you. ^_^! J |
 Rinna 2006-02-12 . chapter 5AGH! Talk about emotional! Ah, ah, ah!! You're definitely good at angst, too. I do think this chapter is the best one you've written for this story so far. But it's scary. For more reasons than just what's happening to the characters. You can probably guess why.
Well, on the bright side, you definitely can write these sorts of things really, really well now. To the point of eerie realism.
But anyway, this -is- a good story. Feels like it's picking up, now, too. Like I said, this chapter especially was excellent. You said you have a plan of what'll happen for the rest of it, now? Very cool. |
 Rinna 2006-02-12 . chapter 4I actually did read this, just didn't review. But gah. I mean, I knew that was coming, but yeah. I like the scene where she blurted it out. Properly dramatic.
Randomly. I'm obsessed with commas. I've descovered that lately. I put them everywhere in my own stories. Then, just now, rereading this chapter, I found myself mentally inserting them into yours. Gah! Get the commas out of my head! |
 Patrick-kun 2006-02-08 . chapter 5O... The plot thickens! Hm... I've heard these kinds of things before... Oh well, past is past... I like how this is going and I feel what each of the characters is going through. Keep up the good work! ^-^ |
 multiples of six 2006-02-04 . chapter 5Woohoo, an update! I feel so sorry for Abby.. and I bet Alex would accept her.. or possibly.. well, I don't want to jinx it. Tee hee. =) |
 Jessica Chadbourne 2006-02-04 . chapter 5Yay chapter! (and yay shortest review you've ever seen) |
 multiples of six 2005-11-17 . chapter 4=O! You read my stories & didn't review!! LOL! No, I definitely don't have a problem with f/f. I like the way this chapter is set up, too, the “I’d be surprised if she told Ms Genest anything.” - “Now Abigail, what has been on your mind lately?” Kep writing =D |
 Patrick-kun 2005-11-16 . chapter 4Jees, what ever happened to "I wont give in! I wont give in!" To my knowlegde what she did was... she gave in. Oh, well your story not mine. Keep at it, I want to find out if Alex ever finds out. ^-^ |
 multiples of six 2005-10-23 . chapter 3Ooh I hope she tells her.. because I'm soo curious!! Can't wait to see what happens =D |
 Jessica Chadbourne 2005-10-22 . chapter 2I know where this is going! ^_^! YAY! But cutting is bad... is she going to do that again? |
 Rinna 2005-10-21 . chapter 2YAY! *Jumps up and down* W#hee whee yay! Hee hee, this is the first time you've posted something I haven't read.
I still think Alex is really cool. I feel so bad for Abby. Ms. Genest, hmm, can tell she's trying to be helpful, but she's kind of... your typical guidance counsilor busybody, ain't she? I wonder how much Abby will tell her?
It's not my imagination that you told me why Abby's so upset, though, right? This chapter seems to support that...but anyways, if I'm remembering correctly, I wonder if you shouldn't add a warning somewhere? When and if it actually gets to that point. Otherwise people might flame you ^^; I hope they don't though, this story is awsome. |
 multiples of six 2005-10-21 . chapter 2Great chapter. I was in that exact situation of someone trying to get me to talk to them this afternoon (except not cuz I'd attempted suicide lol) and yeah.. write more soon!! |
 Rinna 2005-10-18 . chapter 1I still think this story is just amazingly well-written. I really love it. Very powerful. |