lol..boy I could relate to some of that for a sister-sister thing...or I used to be able too. Gah, I guess now that I'm a tad older I see more to her than I let myself before.

But I wont delve to deep into that...

I liked the off-beat style!

I think i's beautiful. Very strong ending.

Powerful words for such a short poem. I like it. I have a sister too, but she only gets attention for whining. I'm an actress, a musician, and a writer as well. I like this poem.