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| Desdemona-Snape 2005-10-20 ch 1, | hey it's ChibiChibi...I like and you are added to my favorites boy! |
| jasonpalth 2005-10-18 ch 1, | Nice vampire concept and story. Nice plot and setting. However, you should try to fill the readers in a bit more on the dark environment. it is missing a few dark gothic elements. More descriptions required. the concept however is nice and origional. |