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| Plinky 2005-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow, lovely poem. Beautiful imagery. You captured the picture beautifully - the whole poem has a really lovely mood to it. I love the last line. Gorgeous. ^-^ |
| The simplest sign of life 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseIt has a good flow- it's one of those poems that don't let you get caught up on words. On the other hand, some bits are a little cliche. Keep writing! |
| das Geschoepf 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abusewow that was just... great.good job! |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved how relatable you make these emotions in this. Well done; keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |