That was... Interesting. I think it was really cool, just as long as you don't pull any of that.

O_O... Wow Jilly. That was amazing. Depressing, but um, WOW O_O

You already know I love it. Awsome, awsome awsome. Though I mst admit, it felt...odd to say the least, reading it in English class. Heh. My own fault. I could always have not read it in English class. It does leave off rather depressing, though, doesn't it? But it's a good spot for it to end. I still think Soran's downfall was caused by his Tragic Flaw and hubris. ^^ Too much AP Lit, yes.

Very well written! M...slash is good. But this is so full of angst...wait, what am I saying?! I love angst! Angst is my life..my precious...lol. Anyway, like I said, this is really good. Your characters are believable, and that's hard to do. Trust me! Do me a favor? Would you mind reading my story and reviewing? I'd love your input.Peace!~Zeva

Will there be more?